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“Wow, …really?” – A Poem

Another old one I dug up from my younger days.

WOW, …REALLY?
You said
“I want all of this.”
And
You said
“I want all of all of that too.”
And
You said
“I can’t live like this.”
Then
You said
“I don’t know what to do.”
So
I tried
To give you all of that
But
Life’s not
About all what you have
So
Instead
I gave you all my love
And
You asked
“Is that all you got?”

4 thoughts on ““Wow, …really?” – A Poem”

  1. mizzezmellymel October 10, 2010 — 4:15 pm

    I like this. I’ve never seen you post poetry before…do you write it often?

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      J. W. Hankins October 11, 2010 — 5:05 pm

      I’ll write a poem whenever one comes to me, but its not often, lol. I have a few more posted on my “Poetic Injustice” page. Take a look.

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      1. mizzezmellymel October 13, 2010 — 9:48 am

        Ok, I’ll check it out.

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          J. W. Hankins October 13, 2010 — 6:38 pm

          Please do. Tell me what you think.

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